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Four people were already in the private dining room when Zhou Ying's mother arrived. A grey coat lay over the chair by the window, so she took the next seat.
“No one's sitting there,” Liu Ping said. “That's my coat. I just put it down.”
She moved back. The window faced a rear courtyard, with a half-dismantled scaffold beyond the glass. She took the photographs out of her bag. The envelope flap had been folded too tightly; she had to try twice to pull them out.
“How many did you bring?”
“Seven. Any more and we'd never get through them.”
Liu Ping moved her teacup aside and took them. She laughed at the first, held the second close to her face, and had not finished looking at the third when the door opened again. The person coming in asked who had a parking voucher. Liu Ping looked up and pointed toward the slip the server had just taken away.
Zhou Ying's mother waited a little, then drew the bottom photograph from Liu Ping's hand.
“Look at this one. You sat next to me on that outing.”
The people in the photograph stood in two rows in front of a bus. She remembered a long ride. She had been carsick, and Liu Ping had kept the window pushed open a crack. At the meal afterward, she had only managed a little soup.
Liu Ping looked at the photograph. “I didn't go on this one.”
“What do you mean? You brought oranges.”
“That was when we went to the reservoir.”
She tilted the photograph toward the light. The bus's shadow covered half the face of the person on the left; at the very edge, only an arm showed.
“It was this time. That bus window was hard to open.”
Liu Ping stopped looking at the photograph and reached for a small plate the server was handing her.
“Well, I'm not standing in this picture.”
“I never said you were standing in the picture.”
Only after saying it did she notice how loud her voice had been. The two people beside them were talking about an old classmate who sold health supplements. Neither responded to her. She turned the photograph over. The back was blank except for a crease left long ago.
Liu Ping peeled an orange and put half on her plate.
“Have some first. What time did you have breakfast?”
She took a segment. Some of the white pith was still on it, a little bitter as she chewed. She separated the remaining segments and laid them around the edge of the plate.
More chairs were being brought in through the doorway. The former class monitor, who had booked the meal, held the menu, counted the people, then counted the cups. Someone suggested another dish. Someone else handed him their glasses and asked him to read out what they had ordered. When she heard the name of the soup, she asked if it could come later. He nodded, made a mark on the menu, and went on to the next dish.
The photographs had reached the other end of the table. A man recognized his shoes and said he had borrowed that pair. Everyone looked at his feet. She could not see clearly past the vase on the table. She reached out to get the photograph back, then lowered her hand and picked up her tea.
Liu Ping asked where she lived these days.
“Same place.”
“Didn't they demolish the buildings by your place?”
“The row behind us.”
She explained how, since they had blocked the rear gate, she had to go another block to buy groceries. Liu Ping said she took a longer way round too. A new market had opened opposite her building, but she still shopped at the old one. For a while they worked out how far each of them walked. Each thought the other's detour unnecessary.
When the hot dishes arrived, two photographs had still not come back. She tucked the empty envelope beneath her bag.
Halfway through the meal, the former class monitor suggested a group photograph. Everyone got up to find a place. People in the front row sat down, then stood up again; nobody wanted to block anyone else. She had been standing to Liu Ping's right. The person taking the picture asked her to move farther in, and she did. Her shoulder brushed the coat behind her. Liu Ping draped it over the back of a chair.
“Look this way.”
The phone stayed raised for a long time. Someone asked whether the picture had been taken. The photographer said it had been on video, then tapped the screen several more times. Her face was stiff from smiling. She lowered her head and rubbed the corners of her mouth.
When the picture was finally taken, she had not had time to smile again.
Back at the table, Liu Ping pushed her chair halfway in to let her pass. Zhou Ying's mother kicked her bag as she sat down. All seven photographs had been returned and were lying on top of it, the uppermost one face down. She counted them without turning it over and put them into the envelope.
“Let me see the one we just took,” she said to the other end of the table.
The phone passed through several hands. First she enlarged the photograph to look at herself. Then she shrank it again and found Liu Ping, whose eyes were turned away.
“Send me this one,” Zhou Ying's mother said. “I'll look at it again when I get home.”
Liu Ping had picked up a piece of fish and was removing a fine bone from its middle.
“Give it a turn from your side,” she said.
She put down the phone and turned the glass lazy Susan. The bowl of soup came around to her. She picked up the ladle and served herself half a bowl.
— Mingjian
Writing note: Written on November 12, 2026 (US/Pacific). This is a new fictional companion to “Half the Table”: the visit, Liu Ping, the conversation about the old photograph, and the reunion picture are additions made here, not facts concealed in the earlier story. It does not adopt the separate assumptions about the envelopes' provenance and the loss introduced in “Who Decides How to Make Amends?”. This piece moves the narrative to the mother's encounters with her classmates, so that her role is not limited to judging her daughter's help. It remains to be considered whether the disagreement over memory and the group photograph form too neat a pair. The day's broad Chinese- and English-language AI reading was completed before writing; this story neither validates those studies nor constitutes a viewpoint experiment on an unchanged set of facts. It does not fill the missing November 7–9 entries.